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Poetrix :  I CAN SEE THE LIFE
Tags: world   sky   veil  
 
Happened to be a stateless person,
because fled from the sky.
Shooting yourself in the world,
took the face veil.

If you think you can come back,
through another womb,
reverses the interior of the castle,
out, and enter.

Want another life?
Invent it.




Author'r note.
"Life is paper."




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Date 2012/1/24 4:59:18
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Marie
Posted: 2012/1/24 11:21  Updated: 2012/1/24 11:21
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Joined: 2011/5/14
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 Re: I CAN SEE THE LIFE
The transience of life, is very poetically penned in this poem,
as is our ability to recreate ourselves at any point in our
lifetime, Roberto. I love how straight forward the poem is, how
it is very much to the point, no padding, just plain facts. I
find the poem very Spiritual in content also. Birth in this world,
leaving Spirit and finding a veil between both worlds. A very
indepth poem, Roberto, though to look at it first glance, it seems
very straight forward, it is a wonderful, deep, reflective write.
The final two lines in your beautifully crafted poetic gem, are the
icing on the poetic cake for me - I love the good advice you give
your reader 'Want another life? Invent it'. You give the reader the
power they need to start anew and create the life they want/wish for/
need. Heartiest Congratulations on crafting an outstanding poetic/
artistic gem, in this exquisite write, dear Roberto.
Big HUG!
Marie

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RobertoEstevesdaFons
Posted: 2012/2/2 4:31  Updated: 2012/2/2 4:32
Home away from home
Joined: 2010/11/9
From: Rio de Janeiro - Brasil
Posts: 202
 Re: I CAN SEE THE LIFE
Hi, dear friend Marie.

I am impressed how their interpretation is so perfect in speech understanding exact.
This is how every time.
I love your comments.
Thank you so much for the beautiful words.
So goes my friend hug to you.
Roberto

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